英国G5大学PS | 实用避坑指南
对于大多数同学们来说，明天就可以剁手了，黑五过去了，boxing day还会远吗！买完东西就能放假回国吃香的喝辣的了！想想是不是还有点小激动呢！
然而现在，还有这么一撮同学们每天依旧愁眉不展，不是因为眼前的苟且，而是因为！还有两个月UCAS就要截止递交了！而我的PS还没有编写出来！
不少同学给我发来了他们的PS习作（嗯，Ver6.0什么的），让我看得胸闷至极。今天我们就来实际谈谈几个重要的PS坑，不然你改到天荒地老，都没改在点子上啊。
1. 你18岁了，请不要再说你是个宝宝
I started learning XXX at the age of 9. At first, I was just simply enjoying solving complicated questions and puzzles. As I grew, I decided to challenge some complex questions and competition papers.
嗯，特别是你要申请G5的学校尽量不要用超过一行的句子说当我还是个宝宝的时候咋咋地，谁还没有个把理想呢，学校要看的是你为为之付出多少努力成为了现在这个非常靠谱的applicant
2. 目标要明确，不要光谈理想谈情怀
When comparing China with the United Kingdom (UK), I can see that different countries or cultures have different economic problems. In the current climate,the UK suffers from immigration whilst China struggles achieving equality.
举例子是可以的，但是呢，举这么大的例子你要确定你能够handle住。对于申请经济的同学，常常容易假大空，千万记得PS的主题是向学校展示我很腻害，并且要用实际理论和事实结合来说明！
3. 虽然不是学术论文，但是也不是和招生官唠嗑
My perception of a modern capital largely came from skylines of Manhattan and historic sites in London. Well, the outdated neighborhoods and motorbikes didnot quite meet my expectations of Beijing.
嗯，如题。这种口语，缩写，俚语什么都不要说，谢谢。
梦想是可以有的，请开始你的表演。下面我们来看点成功的例子
- Out of strong interest, I applied for a volunteer podcast at CN Politics which is a society works on global social scientific research. This working experience enabled me to deepen my knowledgeof national condition and the relationship between philosophy, politics andeconomics. (Warwick)
- Attending a summer course on electronicengineering at the Tech X Summit in Shanghai, I applied my coding skills usingArduino to write the instruction for a remote-controlled electronic car andused my practical skills to install the physical component of the car as acapstone project. (Bristol)
- The initiative to set up “game theory” byVon Neumann is in a way to bring rigor of mathematics to the social science,which helps me find the indispensable correlations between economics andmathematics. (LSE)
大家发现了没有，没有特别酷炫的句子和用词，但是都非常实际地落实到了自己要读的专业，或者自己的相关背景中，这才能够更好地向学校展现你的能力。记住PS不是证书的罗列，不是课程的介绍，也不是对自己过往牛X闪闪的历史报流水账。
今日彩蛋福利，转发救命秘籍到你的朋友圈，点赞超过30人截图给后台，老司机免费给你半小时PS Tutoring哦。能不能走上人生巅峰就此一役了啊。
